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::AEGIS:: Here are your main characters

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UPDATE 2: The character designs have been updated ::AEGIS:: Main Character Update

UPDATE:I fixed the grammar mistakes.

Instead of just slapping on some sketches that I made before making this comic, I decided to give you a piece of their personalities along with their faces. Why no special clothes or color? 1) They change clothes all the time anyway and 2) No color because that deserves to come later in a better drawing with more time put into it.

None of their names are mentioned in this comic, but the one on the left is named Clifford. He's seventeen. The one on the right is Rye. He's only twelve. Both of them are brothers, which is probably why they're bickering. All of what you're seeing here shows no spoilers and nothing on what the story is actually based around. But I'll give you a hint. It's science-fiction...ish. I actually have no fucking clue what genre to put it in.

I'll admit it. I'm a beginner at drawing humans. I have drawn them before but I've never posted something showing the improvement of my skills. Maybe some FullMetalAlchemist drawings, but nothing too special. If you've drawn humans and can offer some advice, I'll be happy to take it.

So if you've seen some of my previous drawings, then you'll know that I may have introduced them before. Only now they're humans and my drawing skills have improved. Also, the story is a lot different from the first time I introduced them. I'll tell you right now, it's a heck of a lot more interesting. 

So what do you think about them? Interesting? Boring? Does Clifford's hair remind you of Skrillex? Is Rye really an asshole? Tell me your thoughts, I'd love to read them!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Hehe, I think I like Aegis already. If you're a beginner at drawing humans, then what am I? Any human drawing you make will likely be better than any human I draw. You have a good sense of shading, and you're great with expressions. I can see very realistic emotion. The dialogue is funny, with no spelling errors. You missed a comma before the words "you moron". It is common for people to ignore the "direct address" grammar rule. Also, using more than one exclamation point has never been proper punctuation.

You are doing very well. I can't wait for the comic. ^_^